The next step in terms of improving my sequence

Now that i've received feedback and have become aware of what needs to be done I can go back and improve my sequence until it's successful. To do this I will re-shoot considering more of  a narrative, in order to create more of narrative I could bring continuity into my sequence;

• Someone running away
• Someone walking through the estate

Once I've re shooted these clips I will place them in final cut pro, creating a more chronological order.  The soundtrack will remain the same but I want to change my film title and font as they remind me more of a horror genre and not a British Drama.